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Monday, October 15, 2012

Founding fathers of the united states of Americ


Dear Founding Fathers, 


There are a lot of things I want to thank you for and there is a lot of things that I would change if I were in your position. Today if there weren't the laws you made back in the late 1700s my life would not be the same and maybe worse than rite now in this time period. So I am writing this letter to you to show you the appreciation for the freedom and the society I have but also what I would have changed and added onto the laws.

The things that you could have done better is give more freedom to blacks because it is not fair to judge people by their skin color and allow them to be slaves. I personally don't think that it is fair to treat others below you from the color of your skin. This is a statement that i think you should have thought through and gave blacks a chance to speak or earn have the rite for freedom by abiding the laws.

Another thing you could have changed was the drafting for the civil war and that 12 to 15 year old boys would have a choice whether or not they join the military because there was such a high risk for death. In wars from the 17th to 19th century and that would mean a lot more of the next generation men would be gone so there would be less women with enough income to support their families. The death rate was tragic and took away many young boys lives but we can not change the past only the future.

The last thing I would of changed is about the military and the tactics so not as many men died. I would have pushed society farther west and have a fraction of the troops in the army stay and take out as many of the British as they can.The reason for this is so that the  united states military can stock up on ammo and guns, make new tactics, and practice shooting. Also the settlers can build new towns by farms and lakes and reproduce food and a stable water supply. This would mean a slow regeneration but it would save a lot more lives. 

I know I can’t change anything now but it is great that you read this and maybe took it into consideration. I hope you can understand what i am saying and that if you were alive rite now you also could read this note. that I don't only like to talk about what I want to change but what I am glad that you did for our country. 

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